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apothecarist) wrote2015-03-22 12:46 pm
apothecarist) wrote2015-03-22 12:46 pm
How's My Brewing?
You know the drill! Leave any and all feedback regarding my roleplaying here!
Since Phoebe is an OC and, as such, more difficult to critique than a canon character, here's some stuff to get you started, or to just completely ignore:
• Is Phoebe consistent and engaging as a character?
• How's the quality of my writing?
• Are my tags engaging? Do they provide ample hooks?
• How does Phoebe come across to you? Even without a proper critique, it'd be good to know how she's received so I can compare it against my intentions!
Comments are all screened, anonymous is enabled, and IP logging is not.
Since Phoebe is an OC and, as such, more difficult to critique than a canon character, here's some stuff to get you started, or to just completely ignore:
• Is Phoebe consistent and engaging as a character?
• How's the quality of my writing?
• Are my tags engaging? Do they provide ample hooks?
• How does Phoebe come across to you? Even without a proper critique, it'd be good to know how she's received so I can compare it against my intentions!
Comments are all screened, anonymous is enabled, and IP logging is not.